Evaluation
For our performance this week we had a number of different
weaknesses but for every weakness we had more strengths. Karen made a little
evaluation sheet with some simple questions to help us to know what they
thought of it, why they thought that and what could be improved. Well for 'Box'
we got mainly positive feedback for our performance and high ratings for our
energy and good (but could be better) for our vocal strength. I agree with both
of these as one of our weaknesses was sometimes our projection. I think this
could have been due to uncertainty in some scenes, in the order of which we
spoke, for example in our final scene where we all had a line, or in the dream
scene where we didn't have a lot of light so we needed to really on our vocal
strength to keep the scene engaging.
One of many strengths, was that nobody forgot their lines.
Well even if they did, it definitely was not noticeable by me, so wouldn't have
been noticeable by the audience. I feel a weakness though was that we were not
brilliantly prepared for the start of the show, for example, the drum for the
first scene which I needed to use wasn't in place, so I had to get it into the
right place before we started which caused a delay and took away focus from the
others. Luckily I think that was our weakest point and the show went upwards
from there. The timing of the piece was not affected by the previous mishap and
was possibly the best we had ever ran it. The beating of the drum really
brought a nice aspect as it made it seem like the pace was just right, not to
slow but also not too fast.
Some of the emotions the audience felt:
-Pain
-Prejudice
-Pity
-Sorrow
-Sympathy
-Sadness
-Happiness
-Confusion
-Hope
-Tension
Some of the emotions the audience felt:
-Pain
-Prejudice
-Pity
-Sorrow
-Sympathy
-Sadness
-Happiness
-Confusion
-Hope
-Tension
All the audience had their own opinion on what scene they
liked best, but the majority of the vote went to 'The Race'. Some of them liked
this scene because they liked the build up with the music, or just because they
liked the energy. At least every scene was mentioned in this category at least
once, so I feel this made all of our work worthwhile. I feel like we did well
to put across the subject matter, by creating a aim to follow which was 'Through
physical representation ‘Box’ presents the varying capabilities and restrictions
of the human body, in order to confront the prejudice and ignorance in society
today.' We used a lot of symbolism in our piece for example the puppet scene,
by using the idea of puppets; it mirrors the idea of Anna having to be
dependent. From the feedback we got given the audience felt as if we achieved
our aim in our outcome, as the majority of the feedback was positive.
Our group worked very well as a team, it might have taken us
a little while to come together but we finally did it in the end. I think one of the reasons for this could be
because I joined the group late so we had to go through the whole process of
meeting and getting to know each other but I felt very welcome. We managed to
come up with some very interesting and creative ideas and represent them in intriguing
ways together. In the final performance we worked together as a team and reassured
and reminded each other where things needed to be and what scene was next. We
also worked well in the sense that we all wanted and respected the fact that we
wanted to do well and so got on with rehearsals by focusing and being there as
much as we could. Characterization was something that we definitely included as
everyone had their own character, for example Joe and Reece both had a lot of
mentions in the ‘who stood out’ question. Reece and Joe were named ‘E’ and ‘G’
for evil and good. They mirrored each other and this was effective as like the
audience said, they stood out, they also wore face paint to so a smile and a
frown.
Our use of dynamics and energy were both strong, we
represented these throughout as we always had control of our characters and
what they were doing. We used a range of dynamics, the most obvious were shown
in the transition between the race and the finish line scene, very we used
music to show the change in soft movements to represent Anna when she is at her
happiest, and gentle and uplifting music was played, to a more sinister and
troubled atmosphere where we changed to struggling and stiff movements using
tense bodies. We did this when the music accented and the light turned to red.
A good example of a strength is how focused the group was. This was probably shown most obviously in the first scene with the chairs and how focused everyone needed to be to concentrate on timing. Everyone needed to be aware of what was happening around them as I was in charge of the drum beats though we couldn't see each other and had to go by ear. As well as focusing by ear the group did well the focus on one spot whilst doing the movements, this created a more dramatic atmosphere which could of easily been taken away by just one person being distracted from the piece.
A good example of a strength is how focused the group was. This was probably shown most obviously in the first scene with the chairs and how focused everyone needed to be to concentrate on timing. Everyone needed to be aware of what was happening around them as I was in charge of the drum beats though we couldn't see each other and had to go by ear. As well as focusing by ear the group did well the focus on one spot whilst doing the movements, this created a more dramatic atmosphere which could of easily been taken away by just one person being distracted from the piece.
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